Lapsed Donor Reactivation Message Rewrite
Win back donors with a better message.
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Rewrite our lapsed donor message. Organization: [ORGANIZATION]. Lapsed segment: [LAPSED_SEGMENT] (such as donors who last gave 13 to 24 months ago). Reasons they may have lapsed: [POSSIBLE_REASONS]. Current message: [PASTE_CURRENT_MESSAGE]. Return: BEFORE: the original message, with annotations in square brackets for problems (guilt, vague ask, no impact, too long, internal jargon). AFTER: a rewritten email of about 120 words that reconnects (what happened since they last gave, only true facts), shares a specific result, asks a simple question or small gift, and makes it easy to change preferences or unsubscribe. VARIANTS: three subject lines and two alternative openings (one story-driven, one data-driven). SEQUENCE: a three-message plan over six weeks, including a final "stay connected?" message that treats a non-response respectfully. TEST PLAN: what to test (subject, ask amount), sample size caution, and success measures. Do not guilt the donor, and do not claim a relationship we do not have. Ask what we can honestly say has changed since their last gift.
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BEFORE: "We miss you! You haven't given in a while. Please donate today." [guilt] [vague ask] [no impact]. AFTER (about 110 words): "Hi Sam, last year your gift helped us serve 4,200 meals. Since then, we opened a second kitchen and now serve about 6,000 a month [CONFIRM NUMBERS]. If you're open to it, a gift of 15 funds a week of fresh vegetables for one family. If you'd rather hear from us less often, you can update your preferences here." Variants: three subject lines; one story-driven opening and one data-driven. Sequence: week 1 update, week 3 story, week 6 "stay connected?" message. Test: subject line and ask amount, sample caution.
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