Eulogy Review: Gentle Feedback on Length, Tone and Flow
Get kind, honest feedback on a draft eulogy for length, tone, structure and delivery, with a 1 to 5 checklist and suggested edits.
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Please read my draft eulogy and give me gentle, honest feedback. I am grieving, so be kind and clear. Draft: [EULOGY_DRAFT]. The person: [PERSON_NAME], my [RELATIONSHIP]. Speaking time allowed: [SPEAKING_MINUTES] minutes. Service style: [SERVICE_TONE]. People who may be sensitive to certain topics: [SENSITIVE_TOPICS]. First tell me what is working well, quoting two lines from the draft. Then score from 1 to 5 each of these: Length for the time allowed (calculate words divided by 130 per minute and show it), Warmth and honesty, Specific memories, Structure and flow, Tone for the audience, Easy to read aloud, Ending. Show them in a table with columns Area, Score, Comment, One change to try. Give a total out of 35 and a gentle summary, not a grade of the person's grief. Then: 1. Mark lines that may be hard to say aloud and offer easier phrasing. 2. Flag anything that may hurt or surprise listeners, framed as a question for me to decide. 3. Suggest cuts if I am over time, listing which sentences to remove first. 4. Offer a trimmed version without changing my voice. 5. List three practice steps for reading it aloud. Do not add stories or facts I have not given. Do not rewrite the whole eulogy unless I ask. If I seem overwhelmed, suggest that I ask a friend or family member to support me, and that it is fine to ask for a shorter role.
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