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Retention Edit Pass Before and After

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Tighten a draft script for flow and attention.

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[ADD SOURCE] is an editorial flag, not a blank to fill. Replace or resolve each flag before you use the result.

Tighten my video script. Script draft: [PASTE_SCRIPT]. Video length target: [LENGTH]. Audience: [AUDIENCE]. Retention data from past videos (where viewers drop): [RETENTION_NOTES].

Return:
BEFORE: the script with problems marked in brackets ([slow start], [repeats an earlier point], [jargon], [long explanation without a visual], [promise delayed], [filler phrase], [unclear transition]) and a word count by section.
AFTER: the tightened script: the main promise within the first 15 seconds; every sentence earns its place; points ordered by interest; transitions that open curiosity ("But here's the catch..."); variety (a story, an example, a number, a visual) every 20 to 30 seconds; no repeated intros ("in this video I will..."); and a clear ending. Preserve my meaning, voice, and facts.
CHANGE LOG: a table of the ten most important edits with the reason.
VISUAL PLAN: where to add cutaways, text, or graphics to support dense passages.
TEST: read aloud and time it; list sentences that trip the tongue.

Do not add claims, numbers, or sources. Mark any claim needing support as [ADD SOURCE]. Suggest two alternative hooks.

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BEFORE: "Hey guys, welcome back [filler], today we're going to talk about sourdough starters [repeats the title], but first please subscribe [promise delayed]." Word count by section: intro 62.
AFTER: "This starter went from flat to doubling in four hours. Here's the one change I made." (16 words)
Change log
1 Moved the promise to the first line.
2 Cut the subscribe request to the end.
3 Replaced the 40-second background story with a 10-second line.
Visual plan: cutaway of the jar time-lapse at 0:05 and 1:10.
Read aloud: 4:12, target 4:00. Sentence 7 trips the tongue.

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